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Critiquing & Editing Service

The North Carolina Writers’ Network offers an ongoing Critique Service for its members. Through this program, Network writers can have their unpublished work reviewed, at below-market rates, by established writers and editors of varying backgrounds and areas of expertise.

Following the guidelines and fee structure below, NCWN members can pay for a critique (also known as a developmental edit) or a copy edit (also known as a line edit) of their unpublished work. A critique takes a “macro” look at the work, with comments and suggestions on the work’s constituent elements and overall effectiveness. A copy edit takes a “micro” look, seeking to find and correct errors of punctuations, spelling, and grammar.

After the critique or copy edit, members can exchange e-mails once with their assigned critiquer, in order to have any remaining questions answered. This exchange is included in the Critique Service fee and, like all communications between member and critiquer, will be conducted through NCWN staff.

The purpose of this service is to help NCWN members develop in their craft. Writers seeking to prepare a manuscript for publication would be better served hiring a qualified freelance editor.

It was unbelievably helpful… I was totally impressed, and it was well worth the price. You have a very satisfied member.

NCWN member Reid Wilson

In addition, the Network now offers its members access to Representation Readers, qualified writers/editors who can help writers avoid false or clichéd portrayals, and bring their characters to life fully and responsibly. For more information on Representation Reads, click here.


Fees

All manuscripts, print or electronic, must have a minimum of 5 pages.

  • Pages 1 – 50: $4 per page
  • Remaining Pages: $3 per page
  • Administrative Fee: $30 for printed submission, $15 for electronic submission

For example, the costs to critique a 100-page manuscript would be as follows:

Electronic
$4 per page x 50 = $200
$3 per page x 50 = $150
Administrative Fee = $15
Total = $365

Print
$4 per page x 50 = $200
$3 per page x 50 = $150
Administrative Fee = $30
Total = $380


Instructions

  • All prose manuscripts—submitted electronically or in print—should be double-spaced, with 1-inch margins and in 12-point, Times New Roman font.
  • Printed prose manuscripts must be single-sided.
  • All poetry manuscripts—submitted electronically or in print—must be single-spaced, with a limit of only one poem per page, with 1-inch margins and in 12-point, Times New Roman font.
  • Printed poetry manuscripts must be single-sided.
  • Stage plays and screenplays—submitted electronically or in print—must be submitted in proper format. Guidelines for stage plays and screenplays can be found here (courtesy of Story Sense) and here (courtesy of Writopia).
  • Page number and your last name should appear on each page.
  • Printed manuscripts must NOT be bound when submitted, except with a paper or butterfly clip.
  • Electronic manuscripts must be submitted in Word (.doc, .docx), with a file name that includes your last name & at least part of the work’s title (i.e., Wolfe_LookHomeward.docx).
  • Printed manuscripts must include two cover letters: one that lists the manuscript’s title, genre, and page count, as well as your top three choices (see list below) to critique it; and another giving the critiquer a brief synopsis of the manuscript’s contents, as well as what aspects of the manuscript most concern you (i.e., plot, character development, dialogue, line editing, etc.).
  • Electronic manuscripts should include the second cover letter described above, for the critiquer’s reference. This cover letter should not be included in the total page count. The information described in the first cover letter will be collected by the online registration form.
  • Submit electronic manuscripts by completing the online registration form first, then attaching the manuscript (in Word) to an e-mail addressed to critique@ncwriters.org, with “Critiquing & Editing Service” or “C&ES” in the subject line.
  • Submit printed manuscripts, including check or money order made payable to NCWN, and SASE for return of critiqued manuscript, to:

NCWN Critiquing Service
P.O. Box 21591
Winston-Salem, NC 27120


Critique Service Submission Checklist

  • Your manuscript, properly formatted
    • Prose: Double-spaced, 1-inch margins, 12-point Times New Roman font (single-sided if printed)
    • Poetry: Single-spaced, 1-inch margins, 12-point Times New Roman font (single-sided if printed), 1 poem per page
    • Play/Screenplay: See Story Sense or Writopia
  • Cover letter(s) with required information (1 cover letter if electronic; 2 cover letters if printed)
  • Completed online registration form, with payment by VISA, MasterCard, or Discovery, if electronic
  • Manuscript e-mailed to critique@ncwriters.org, as Word attachment with proper file name, if electronic
  • Payment by check or money order, made payable to NC Writers’ Network, if printed
  • Self-addressed envelope (SASE) with sufficient postage to return your manuscript, if printed

If you have any questions, please call 336-293-8844 or e-mail critique@ncwriters.org.